Changing Lanes
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Thursday, 1 May, 2008, 1:32 am
Filed under: Poetry
Filed under: Poetry
Drop the pen and put on your armour,
There’s enough been spilled for one day,
Judgment on your works will follow,
And jealous will sharpen their tongues.
The memories of youth are leaving
A bitter taste in your mouth now,
Knowing that you can’t turn back time,
And that your heart lacks fire.
The naive eyes that watched your childhood
Are gone like so many things you take for granted,
And you will allow your thoughts to slowly wilt,
Until your mind has gone,
And a body is all that is left.
Zoë Campbell, 16/02/07 revised: 30/04/08
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Zoe–I enjoyed this!!!–I readed it several times–When your mind is gone and only your body is left…fer you that is ay GOOD thing…fer me…well…I’m in trouble–LOL–I like all that this says and I relate to it completely–I heard that you give a quarter fer every good comment–YOU OWE ME!!!!–LOL–Cliff…
Comment by Johnson (arthurrexpoo) Wednesday, 7 May, 2008 @ 12:58 amSomehow i missed the point. Probably lost in translation
Anyway … nice blog to visit.
cheers, Reattachment.
Comment by Reattachment Thursday, 19 June, 2008 @ 6:55 am